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The Women of Truth

Warm and tender hearts,
cups and collanders of overflowing emotion,
Intellectual smarts,
and beauty like that of a wavy ocean.
With just one word
they could silence an entire room.
Remember that we wouldn't be here today
without their tender love after we escape the whom.

With a hand outstretched
and a spirit so kind.
Loyal to their bonds,
and they have a brilliant mind.
Often times I compliment
a woman near and dear.
Not all guys are asses
some of us are quite sincere.

Author notes

Here's to the women that don't sell themselves short or sell themselves out. My room mate and I have been talking to some intellegent and amazing women lately, and we both agree that women's beauty often times goes unappreciated.
So here's to you, the hard working under appreciated woman, from a guy who actually cares and appreciates such valiant efforts.

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  • Antipodi
    May 14

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    wow so many unsung heros through time and why were they ignored cause they were women ..it is truly about time we look back and learn about issues that really did change history...go ladies you are the best...


  • Metalchica
    May 14

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    i thought this was really good and yes not all guys are asses especially you i think your the nicest guy i have ever met and i am glad i have gotton to know you
    love your
    Metalchica