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How Can I?

HOw do you hide your last love,
when you've found the truth?

the ocean is teeming with truth,
this is everything but a ruse.

The box that hides my broken heart,
now contains shouts of glee.

As what was lost has now been found;
love from here to thee.

My muscles weaken with the mutter,
of your fair and gentle name.

As our love can only grow,
i deduct this is not a game.

And as forever, plus one day,
my heart shall long for you.

as a puzzle wishes to be completed,
and a lie screams out the truth.

Such beauty filled with temperment,
i declare you, my rose.

As you are my wayward sin,
a good one, i suppose.....

but as this love comes from the north,
and not from two directions.

i fear this love; you shall not know,
never, lying it to be subjected.

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