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Lonely Lola

If I don't see you in a couple of days
I'll assume you've run away.

Tell me how do feel?
Are you crying still?

Tears fall down like watery rain.
You pack your bags running away from your pain.
But what will you gain?
Pray if you're going insane.

Tell me how do you feel?
Baby, are you crying still?

If I don't hear from you by tomorrow
I'll assume you're drowning in your sorrow.

Baby, life keeps on living.
Problems keep us busy.
Alone, is how we feel.

But don't you say, "I give in."
Don't let them get under your skin.
One day we will all win.

Don't you ever give up!
God loves you.
He's willing and ready to help you.
"He who endures to the end will be saved."
That's what Matthew 6:33 says.
We all have an accounting to God.
He doesn’t want us to kill ourselves.
We won't be saved if we kill ourselves.
Endure till the end my friend.

If I don't see you in a week or two
I'll assume you've done what I prayed you wouldn't do.

But before that could happen I'll pray for you.
I ask God to watch over my lonely Lola.

Dry your tears girl.

Author notes

This too is to inspire.
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  • Lanasaur
    October 29

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    This is really beautiful! I love this poem its very descriptive, meaning ful and loving!
    Lana


  • peaceimout
    May 30

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    A pre-write and while I was hoping for a bit of a different take than what most have entered into this contest, I still find this just as captivating, inspirational and well worth the read. Something about it just sparks along with emotions of the heart. Thank you for entering.