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Prompt: Suicidal

{-G-R-A-S-P-I-N-G} at Goodbye
I ~h*o*l*d~ this _Knife_
Learning to <3Love<3 again

<3Love<3 myself,
My ^BLOOD^,
My ==end==

It's like the !begenning!
A  [F/R/E/S/H]  start
Until `t`o`m`o`r`r`o`w comes again

With nothing left to {-G-R-A-S-P}
And no-one left to |*S*T*A*N*D|
I learn to <3Love<3 again

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First time attempting dirty pretty give any advice possible

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  • Guerrero
    May 15

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    i like it. i have never read dirty pretty before so im not too sure about what it is and what not but i really like everything about this

  • I can honestly say that even though I'm not a big fan of dirty pretty, I like this. Good job and Good luck in the contest!

    Thanks for entering!