{-G-R-A-S-P-I-N-G} at Goodbye
I ~h*o*l*d~ this _Knife_
Learning to <3Love<3 again
<3Love<3 myself,
My ^BLOOD^,
My ==end==
It's like the !begenning!
A [F/R/E/S/H] start
Until `t`o`m`o`r`r`o`w comes again
With nothing left to {-G-R-A-S-P}
And no-one left to |*S*T*A*N*D|
I learn to <3Love<3 again
Author notes
First time attempting dirty pretty
give any advice possible
A contest entry
- The Cutters And The Suicidal by Juggalette Sammy.
1000 points, ended May 22, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hmmm... give an honest opinion!
Comments
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i like it. i have never read dirty pretty before so im not too sure about what it is and what not but i really like everything about this
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I can honestly say that even though I'm not a big fan of dirty pretty, I like this. Good job and Good luck in the contest!
Thanks for entering!


