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thoughts soaked in anticipation
deliberate of being in existence
emotions spill memories
endlessly


night falls
upon a judgement


untill more thoughts
juxtapose over the fragments of time










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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    July 24
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    Wow. This is amazing. What a fantastic job on the imagery and emotion. I especially love that last line. Amazing.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~