Tears rolling down her face
She is slowly losing everything
She doesn't know what to do
She just wants to scream
She doesn't have much friends now
And she cries herself to sleep
Every single night now
She just wants to scream
Everybody thinks shes ok
But really
They don't know anything
She just wants to scream
Pretending to be alright
Is wearing her down
She is growing tired
She just wants to scream
Blood pours over the floor
In a pool under her head
As she falls the floor
She finally did scream...
Author notes
Prolly sucks...but...its how I feel..I wrote in English class. lol
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Awesome!
Even though awesome probably isnt the best word for a poem like this i think you understand what i mean. I 100% can emotionally connect with your poem and i love it. I just want to scream says it all.
It was a little choppy but overall it did actually flow.
Keep up the writing! It such an amazing release, i just hope that for you, the scream doesnt have to come the way it does in your poem.
Great write...
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i think its very good. you did a great job and i have felt this way before. well done
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