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moment







A moment after moment
thinks about a moment
that hasn’t been a moment after all
in the lies of karma folds
another moment passes by
before awakening










a moment awaits
followed by another one
sums up life
















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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    July 24

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    Wow. This is so true, and amazingly written. You are truly talented. How have you been? I haven't heard from you in a while. I hope all is going well.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • inder silver member
    July 3

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    well done

    the second para deserves the break from the spiralling first one and it hits the reader like a missile! bulls eye, provokes a contemplative response...well done Ankeeta