A plunge underneath the waters deep,
Eyes closed and body swinging,
Between folds of unwanted weed.
Light swallowed and darkness personified,
Echoes of a hollow cry,
Gushing behind the comforts of a beautiful lie.
(where no more air left to breathe)
it rises slowly…
Eyes closed and body floating
and a smile staring at heavens
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i am love with that song and the music. its amazing!!!!! 
..made me write something like this
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Wow. This is truly amazing. I loved the softness of it. My favorite lines were "echoes of a hollow cry, gushing behind the comforts of a beautiful lie." That was absolutely stunning.
Write on.
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Your lovely words bring to mind one swimming in the ocean deep among the plants near a reef!
I am sorry I could not listen to the song as the link is not working.
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hey thanks. you always find time to check my poems...well regarding the link, i think you have to copy paste it on your web bar ....hope you enjoy the song as well
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