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life

you say i have a limit?
i say i haven't hit it

you say we're on a track?
i say I'll make the map

you say life's just a game?
i say don't be ashamed

we live
we die
we breathe
we choke

but tonight contains my poison to tomorrow's antidote
tomorrow blockades the hope of yesterday's failures

you say i have a limit?
i say i havent hit it


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