You and your beard in that cave
To me, is like, so phallic -- savant.
Your gun, custom, with banana clip
And you give new meaning to camouflage.
Incidentally, I bet you rode well
That horse, those Russian helicopters.
You're like Rambo, but deliciously religious.
Born rich, why do you do it...?
Buildings topple, trains pop like spoiled tuna
Babies shredded to pieces on a warm clear day.
Man, if you aint the antichrist I've been had
In your breccia surroundings with poppies.
You will never be caught, you hero
With a brain that has no cells.
The West has some idea, you are a blood-moon
Waxing.
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I agree with almost all the comments Ive read so far, I never thought about writing a poem about that bastard, Im sure there are a few bleeding hearts who will blame all his motives on us for not understanding his problem with normality. Hell with them too, I say let them go kiss his ass. Great write.
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I like this write. It does state things quite interestingly concerning bin Laden. But I would mention that while this is a good write, it does not really apply to the contest qualifications. I suppose it could be an Iraq based war focus, but even then it is not an argument for or against. I do like this though. Thank you.
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Wow. This poem makes a good point, but ewwww. Anyway, I asked for East v West and this fits the criteria. It is very very grand except the baby part. But I understand why you put it in there, and if one turns away from the truth, one is susceptible to being blinded by it later, resulting in potentially detrimentle consequences. Thanks for entering, it made a very good point, and flowed very well indeed!
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Oh, I love Osama....if it is true, if it is all true... He is a teddy bear i snuggle in my darker nights, when i am afraid and alone.
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This is really interesting. I agree with it completely. Good luck and thanks for entering. Blessed be
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Still waxing. Huge chills of dread & creepiness. Powerful piece.
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wow,this was really cool,i hate osama too,he is a evil mean,great write,good job,keep writing!
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Jesus comes in the clouds...
Them's some sticky clouds mate. Kinda makes me not wanna look up, and walk with an umbrella!!
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To me, is like, so phallic -- savant.
-makes me think...You're a 16 year old valley girl
the savant throws me off that though...
shredding babies...well that's a little sick, but i keep thinking of dead baby jokes i know =( which is sad.
what's breccia mean? im too lazy to look it up, and it's the only word i didn't know!
all in all i like it, Sama's a tool, but whatever makes the world work i suppose. you have to have at least one asshat out there.
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Jesus, you're right? that is hysterical... LMAO.
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Lol. Bonnie Q said '...until Jesus comes in the clouds.'
Blood moon still waxing.
I'm sure I've heard that somewhere before...I think I know what it means, but it'll always be on the tip of my tongue. Left up to the reader to be a little more articulate. And artistically bashes a man revered by many, hated by many, wanted and forgotten by many...But many know who he is...odd. Some of these other comments just crack me up apart from the piece. Artis' comment is quite educational as well...
'Free thinkers are dangerous'
Peace
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Thanx for sharing horus8, I just wonder if we will ever find the clown and bring him back to serve justice for the crimes he has committed. Appreciate the write.
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um. osama is hot.
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Hmm...pretty decent...I liked the first 2 stanzas best...pretty opinionated and expressive. Nice one. Thanks for sharing
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A comical sex change for the better.(as sung to the tune of: 'Old time rock and roll.' by Bob Seage
by Artis on Nov 08, 2001
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Here's a solution for all pacifists
to help resolve the fighting as they wish
just one more idea for their tiny lists
to end the war using a tactical twist
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Let's capture Bin Laden alive.....unharmed
and when we've got him handcuffed, and unarmed
we'll spirit him away without alarm
to lead a new life that will match his charm.
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we'll send him off to Sweden where they'll take
away the balls he does not have, and make
Bin undergo a sex change, then he'll be
a Bimbo Laden who'll we'll soon set free
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We'll feed bin hormones until he grows breasts
the size that Afghan men all love the best
His big brown eyes will glare from his smooth face
now free from hair, he'll face his next disgrace
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We'll drape him all in black from head to toe
with veils and covered flesh...a fashion show
then on him we'll tattoo a big surprise
A U.S. flag inside his hairless thighs
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Then when he looks just like a taliban girl
we'll fly him back across our troubled world
and leave him near the taliban's front line
perfumed but sweaty, he'll make quite a find
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I'm sure he'll undergo a heavy session
like his Islamic women face oppression
he'll offer them a patriotic feast
and learn the pleasures of being a beast
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No longer leading, humbly he will bow
they'll bend him over, and they'll teach him how
and maybe he'll know in his twisted brain
the way that they treat females is insane
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He'll cry to Allah through a blur of pain
to grant him pardon but he will remain
a she forever on the desert plain
living a life debased, and quite profane.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Artis-(c)-2001
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I like this. It disturbed me immensely for some reason but I really did like it. I enjoyed the passion and the pent up anger and frustration I could feel behind the words. The way that it was written though without rhyme had a definite flow that I enjoyed as well. And I am pretty sure I agree with the general message however my brain is fried and I admit I haven't fully processed the true depth of your words yet. All my rambling done now, I'll say great write.
~JayLynn
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Yes Reno, but I HAVE THE DWARVES MuWAHAHAHAHA. lol.
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with the exception of george w, i do believe osama is the most dangerous man on the planet. he should have been stopped many years ago, yet no one wanted to stick their necks out and put an end to his madness. he may never be caught...he's crazy, but not stupid...however, god will eventually and ultimately be his judge. (especially liked your 6th stanza...very powerful!)
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Well....Good poem....not really a poem....more like....rambling....with fancy wording....but somehow..I like it....But let us not forget...you're an asshole....and I got three points for this comment...
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Awesome write, Horus! Bin Laden has no choice but to do as he does: it's all a part of the greater, divine plan. Still, I must interject that he is not the anti-Christ: one of his minions, perhaps. The anti-Christ is the great whore and her harlot daughters mentioned in Revelation, which are the apostate churches only appearing to be Christian. Still, I really like this poem: you point out so well the subtly of Bin Laden, his ability to be ever one step ahead of those who seek him. None of this will end until Jesus comes in the clouds. Lots of love in Christ~~ BonnieQ
Edited on Mar 11, 11:07 p.m. because ''.
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