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hiding sorrow

the tear rained from my eye,
no one ever sees me cry,
internally the tears are falling,
but out side happiness is calling,
my smiles hide the pain,
on the insides im going insane,
the siring pain of doing this tomorrow,
because i know im hiding sorrow.

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