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Beating

Violence, rage, anger, hate, pain
I fucking hate you
But, don't stop
For the love of god....
Don't stop.

Screaming red
Red, red, red
Feeling, bright, blue and purple
Colors of infinity
I know how to deal with this

Bursting, tears, pain
This seems to be
a reoccurring theme
Raping my body, taking from me my agony
I am nothing, nothing

And, I'll love you for it

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For once, I don't feel the need to explain.

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  • Eve of Sophie
    November 12
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    Cleverly human

    You expressed the feelings of this so well. Seriously, well done. I especially like the way you wrote the colors. Fantastic!