Dancing on clouds, sliding down rainbows.
Twirling in the rain uncaring of the closer coming thunder.
Weightlessness without wings and only one guidance.
Freefall, then a warm glow from an enchanting embrace.
Droplets of smiling tears,
A light stroke to wipe them away
Dancing hearts on sweet poetic words, tying feelings even tighter.
Shivering whispers, knowing glances guide them through humanity.
They have their own natural light that darkness never touches.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- emotion by transit.
950 points, ended May 30, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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very nice i love the flow... great job on the win... keep it up...
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poet
This is a wondrous piece of poetry. And so may it be that the spirit forever shines. especially in your words young poet. Happy writing and well penned.
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Nice write not really what I was looking for but good.
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Dear LadyRay: Love your emotions in this one. I can feel them coming through clearly. Love, Janjan xoxo
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that is very good
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Beautiful
Your imagery is just beautiful. I love to way it rolls of my tongue. This would make a great song. Thanks for sharing it.
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thank you
I appreciate the time you took to read it. :3p
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What a lovely poem. You use some very beautiful words and put them together in such a way that creates warm feelings inside.
"Droplets of smiling tears,"
"Dancing hearts on sweet poetic words"
Lovely flow and rhythm creating a very effective, emotive piece.
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I'm glad it gave you poet pleasure.
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wonderful work. so beautiful,
made me feel so care free
different from the usual things i read but i relly enjoyed it
i lov the thought of dancing on clouds and sliding on rainbows, to be wieghtless without wings.
this is such a beautiful piece
keep up the brilliant work girl -
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I shall!
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Beautiful
Great title, wonderful imagery, fabulous choice of words!
"Dancing on clouds, sliding down rainbows". From the first line, I could tell this was going to be a great love poem, and I wasn't disappointed
A pleasure to read.
David.
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aaww
love! what a great emotion and the simple, sweet way you described it was amazing! The imagery was good and it reminded me of the simpler and better things in life.
good luck!
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