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Aiden....

Do not cry my child.
For I am not gone.
I am still with you
even when your hope seems gone
Just look around you and you will see.
I am with you.
When you hear the wind rustle the willow leaves
remember my soul.
And when you hear the ocean roar,
remember how I was always there
to keep you from drowning in the crashing waves.
When you hear the blue bird's song,
Remember my voice
My child do not be afraid,
for I will always stay true to my word.
And remain in your heart.

Author notes

this actually started out as a children's book for my german class. if any one is interested in reading the final copy i turned in pease just leave me a comment, because i would have to translate it back into english.

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