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Housewife

2 Weeks ago, I ran a kennel. I was more than a mother and a wife

Now, i spend my days cleaning and cooking, with the kids

I keep telling myself, this isn't permanent, this isn't my life.


I am more then a maid and caregiver

Just because i wash your boxers

doesn't mean, i'm only your wife.


I am a person, scrubbing the floor,

I just wish you could see me as more.


I am beautiful, and strong

I am not afarid to admit when i'm wrong.


Just because i serve you your dinner,

doesn't mean i'm your slave.


I am a woman that wants to be appercatied for who she is.

I am a person who chooses to be in your life,

Not just your fucking housewife!!!

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  • Heroesrox
    May 20

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    I am not afarid to admit when i'm wrong.
    (Afarid should be afraid.)

    and...
    wants to be appercatied for who she is
    (Appercatied should be appreciated.)

    This is very good and emotional. Very powerful write. I have several close friends who feel like this every day, so I know what it's like sort of. Awesome piece. Thanks for the wonderful share! Best wishes to you.