Dead to me is all he said
It's all she need to hear
Her tears ran down her face
So quiet it sounds like rain as it hits the floor
The blood following to the floor
Running down her arms
Dripping off her finger tips
The puddle of tears and blood
forms at her feet
Slipping on her dreams
Her wish to be dead
Her wish to feel no pain
A plee for help that is never heard
she falls seems never ending
Hitting the floor she feels no pain
Use to the feel of heartbrake
The feel of a knife on her skin
pain is her life she takes her last breath
going, going lost forever
What did you think
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breathless
i liked it! thanks for commenting my poem too! its just kinda my opinion but i dont suggest using the same word twice in one paragraph thing! but it was still very emotional
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lol and you thought you couldn't write poetry...whats that^^? its very good chelsie
"Slipping on her dreams " the "on" should be "in" though..great job
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