Watching u hold him,
Killing me slowly,
What do I do,
I'm seem nothing to you.
I walk away,
I cry at night,
I say I love you,
Still I seem nothing to you.
Walking alone,
I cry,
I'm hurting but you can't see,
Sorry I'm dieing.
What did you think
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i've been there to but i got over him because i figured out thatif i was worth nothing to him then i deserved better
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GARY! awe baby; i'm so sorry you keep feeling this way... you know you can always talk to me. This isnt fair for you to keep hurting this way; i know i dont know who SHE is but i do not like her right now... i'm so sorry you have to go through this pain every time... awe i wish i could just hold you close and make everything alright. I LOVE YOU! NEVER FORGET THAT! *kisses cheek* your peom is beautiful by the way!
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awh my gary we all feel this at some point in time in our lives it'll get better i promise. i love the write it was really good.
I've gone through this many a times before, but i got through it. I would change the first I'm seem to "I seem". that what she did to you was wrong and mean of her. she doesnt see you for who you are only what she would change you to be for her. there is nothing i'd change about this poem. it is a fantastic poem and a fantastic write.
I Love You
Sami♥
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IT GET GREATER LATER IVE BEEN THEIR BEFORE
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awh. so sad & so good. & so true. good write.
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NOOOO
*gives you love first.
no no no no
Me want you to beh happy Gary
*sniffles
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