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The Xoanon

unearthed

long-dead cherub
death grip
clutching possessively to drawn breast
in brown bone fingers

a xoanon
of nurture mother figure
bestowed token of devotion
to carry into that terrible beyond
attended by tender, saline-stained kisses 

Author notes

Xoanon - a primitive rudely carved image or statue

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  • zigdaddy silver member
    May 24
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    Thank you for the encouraging comments. Great contest.

  • Very interesting. It reminded me on some of the pictures I have seen of young mummies from Peru. Congratulations on the gold cup.

    Mike

  • I like your style, the image is solid yet abstract enough to let my mind roam and create it with force. Excellent

  • First: Thanks for the new word for my vocabulary. You brought this difficult subject into being with ten words; and you enabled me to picture it and feel for it. This is a first rate job. Congratulations.