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Reflection of Potency

I see the beauty.
I see the reflection of potency
in a heart that pumps and clatters
to the rhythms of life
that is naked and wild.










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  • tara wilson gold member
    July 11

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    i LOVE this Jaden! i hope all is potent, naked and wild in your world. i have your other, longer ones bookmarked & will return. i miss reading you.


  • IronIcecream
    June 4
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    i believe potency is will to start
    action, and asymmetric search for balance


  • Geneva
    June 4

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    What I see is a beating heart.
    my favorite: precise to the point
    least favorite: I''d like more of a point


  • Heart Sutra
    May 27
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    Yeah, the naked and wild! Amen.


  • HystericalHeart
    May 13
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    o.o Very pretty! I enjoyed this. It inspired me to write some more. Lol. Thank you!

  • Rowan gold member
    May 13

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    "in a heart that pumps and clatters"
    ooh. You better have the clatter checked. lol.
    Succinct, great lines, powerful ending. I like naked and wild.

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