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A Wonderful Lie

one little lie
deeper and deeper
it sinks
till, I'm
not even sure
its false

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  • Exodus gold member
    June 15

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    This is a really interesting piece, and I certainly know what it's talking about. Sometimes it's those little white lies we tell one time too many that can make all the difference.

    Thank you
    F

  • this is something that many of us can relate to...i think it is easier when we believe the lie ourselves...thanks for sharing this one. good luck in the contest...peace an dlight always in ALL ways...kp