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Believe me...

Believe me when i say,
It's through,
That I have had enough.
Yes, you've changed,
But only fractionally.
You let me go places,
On my own,
You weren't as overprotective,
as you once were.

But history tends to repeat itself,
Why? I don't know.
You went back to her,
Although i don't blame you.
She can make you a lot happier,
Than i can.
I hold no grudge, no condamnation for you.
I just want you to be happy,
And likewise for me.

Be happy... be... happy...
Please be safe in all that you do.

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  • Sandygram silver member
    May 14, 2009

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    Very Heartfelt Poem

    I can feel the emotion within your words and many will relate to them. A lovely poem!!!!!! Take care, Sandy


  • Raining Kisses gold member
    May 13, 2009
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    nicely penned, the ending is excellent, sort of animates the whole piece
    bravo