Life
like an arrow
Straight,
narrow
Boring to
the marrow.
A contest entry
- 10 Words by misticmoonlite.
850 points, ended May 15, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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that's surely sweet, genuine and unique. Loved most cuz of the idea. It is s short yet explains everything!!!
Liked it!!
Good Luck
Ani
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.
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Congratulations on winning the gold with this entry. You did a great job!
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Cute write. Nice job finding a rhyme in only 10 words and congrats on the well deserved gold trophy for this piece.
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lol this is cute, and does say a lot in these few words, thank you for this entry, good luck
Linda
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I love this poem the flow is awsome and it runs smooth. And the rhyme is awsome. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you my dear.
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these are a very nice group of ten words! aptly titled as well. i do not find life boring at all though...moments maybe, but life-never! still i love your grouping of words and the rhyme of it all. great write and good luck in the contest!
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Thank you for your comments. I don't think that life is boring, quite the opposite.Just that a linear life, that is,everything in a straight line could be boring.
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