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At the end of the day

Here comes the end of the day..
the moment to sum things up,
the moment to look back at moments that have passed by,
the moment to make a judgement about what was right and wrong,
It's the time when the sun drowns
in the ocean of West
And I drown into my bed
A little dizzy, a little silent
Not knowing what to say
Nothing to conquer, nothing to fight about
Nothing left at the end of the day
But just a moment of silent prayer
Where I can see nothing but radiance
And I sink to bed hoping for a better day
Now my eyes close and I see someone wink and say
'No matter what happened today
You can do much better in the coming day'

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  • tashgirl
    November 11

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    wow I love the last two lines no matter what happend today
    you can do much better in the coming day it tells that what ever hapens tommorows another day

  • drapedindarkness
    August 11

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    A sweet poem, Full of hope
    Sinking into bed, Able to cope
    With what today brought
    And what tomorrow brings
    Find in dreams what you sought
    Wait for tomorrows unknown schemes


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 10
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    Lovely write

    This is too cute and soo true indeed


  • Mrs. Mautino
    May 16

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    Aww Short, sweet, and simple. Very mellow and warm feeling, hehe. I really enjoyed it it's like a nice cup of tea and a good book feeling. I miss reading poems like these. Thank you very much!