Wandering this world for love.
Wearing beauty despised.
Hoping to make my mark,
On these plains of sorrow.
Treading alone.
Author notes
An entry for a contest and well idk I think it sucks.
No more or less then 20 words
A contest entry
- 20 words by socialstar.
600 points, ended May 20, 2009, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
...... ya idk.......
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wow
wow....short...but to the point and nicely put...i love it.
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wow, good!
the thing that hit me was the second line. its a great freeverse. i love this. nice.
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lovely imagery...congrats on gold!
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beautiful!
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First off, thanks for staying in the word limit. I like that you took us all on this journey. Love can heal all wounds, or create the most deepest ones. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Great work. I didn't find that this poem sucked at all. You've got a great take on the prompt and you made me wander
So great work. Thanks for staying within the 20 word limit. Thanks for entering the contest and best of luck to you . Kahy
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Your titels are always the icing on the cake. Short, but genune
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