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Mother Nature

When I look around she is all I see
From the baby blue skies to the tall oak trees
To the smell of the flowers, filling the air
To the gentle wind blowing though out my hair

From blue grass country to the weeping willow tree
To the tall grass in the prairies and the deep blue sea
From the sun that shines brightly in the sky
To the Birds that were created to fly

From the rivers and docks
To the Colorado Rocks
From her beauty in everything
To her nice cool days of spring

From the Rain from up above
To the summer fun we have and love
From the ripple from the stream
To the gooey moss that is green

From the to the tall mountains
To the beautiful fountains
From the pouring waterfalls
To the chilly days of fall

From the thundering of her fist
To the mid morning mist
From the freezing days in winter season
To all these things that has a reason

From the wind that howls and blows
To the annoying crows
And to her beautiful noises and calls
She is know as Mother Nature to us and to all

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  • There is only one line that I think you should change:
    "the smell of the flowers, polluting the air"

    - because flowers are beautiful, and pollute is a negative word