Radiant beauty guarded by auburn thorns
Opens her arms of love to a green world,
Sprinkling the gift of life upon earth which
Envelopes a dark forest with her morning glory.
Alas this princess a prisoner among thorns
No man can touch or feel her undying splendor
Grieves behind a lustrous smile of wonder,
Engaged to the deep roots of her past whilst
Languishing in her love when day meets night.
A contest entry
- How good are you at acrostics? by Titus.
450 points, ended May 22, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is some everlasting floral distribution you got here. Lovely work.
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An excellent acrostic Sprinkled with sadness that i think adds to the overall effect of the piece Good luck in the contest
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Hmm... you've fused sad, and beautiful together so well that I don't want to it's sad, but don't want to say it's beautful either because sadness such as this isn't very beautiful. I loved the descriptions here, even moreso after I saw it was an Acrostic. Nice job sis!!
Troy
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Very Good
Nice job with the form, the flow and the story. Thanks for sharing
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