Her effervescent beauty and superiority
are radient and spaciously presumed,
her dreams of teaching the world
through her song, her voice,
the only thing in the world when she sings,
Looking somewhere inside herself,
she sees completeness, totality,
excelling in everything placed
in her pretty hands,
well-loved, self-loved,
pure and serene,
she floats impossibly on love's breeze,
She does all that I cannot,
taking my dreams and putting them
high up on the pedestal they
deserved to be on,
Waking up on a new morning,
knowing that she is the hidden
part of me, that hasn't
had a chance to bloom,
time and only tinme will make it,
possible, waking up, in the dawn,
Look, a new day, has begun,
Author notes
My middle names are Freya and Dawn, I picked Dawn 
I'm a singer so I picked that Dawn would have all my hopes and dreams that I have yet to achieve, hope you like it
A contest entry
- Snapshots of Life [with a twist] ~ by Manda Kathryn.
1000 points, ended June 4, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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What lovely middle names you have, I've always loved the name 'Dawn'
This is beautifully hopeful, I like that Dawn sings and lifts her voice through the days - nicely done
Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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this would be awesome song! great job!
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simply put, gorgeous!!!!!
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i like it, i like how it flows, without rhyme, and the difference in structure for each stanza, with new ideas..
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