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She Could Use to Lose

Yeah, she could use to lose
A little weight.
That's what I thought at first.

Now she doesn't see me,
She sees the apple I'm eating and--
It's the enemy.

God I know I need to be there for her,
But how much of this
calorie in calorie out
skipping lunch
working out
breaking down
round-about
twisting way of speaking out
can I take?

how much can she take-
before she loses control of this
feigned
control?

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  • wow...thats all i can think to say is...wow...
    thank you for entering...good luck