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Friends

Dates are unimportant
but feelings are aloud,
how destiny brought us together
i still cant make out.
the only thing to acknowledge however
is the friendship we are carrying out...
which is blossoming day by day
and which is just making us happy ang gay!
the things am writing down
might be a matter of laughter,
but i bet these will together make
memories to cherish ever after.
so here am being true and straight...
that i wont ever let go a friend so great!

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  • Yemassee gold member
    August 30

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    We all need friends and it is good to occasionally let them know that we appreciate them and to let them know how important they are to us. Nicely done.


  • tears.of.silence
    May 14

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    Welcome To AllPoetry

    I have been reading a lot about friendship lately and this is just another one of thos fabulous poems that make you go awww how sweet. Thanks for sharing.

    Welcome to the Site.
    Kahy