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Snow Falling On A Candle

Snow falling on a candle
Suffocating the flame
Roses placed gently down
By a family, losing hope again

Tears falling, flowing free
From strangers eyes
But not from me

I can see their pain
But I'm so far removed
I feel out of place
Am I being rude?

These people I'm related to
But never met before
Is it right to feel for them?
I don't know that for sure

Does anyone really know who I am?
I'm my Dad's daughter
But that's all they know
"Some girl named Daniela
Just here for the show"

Why should I feel for them?
I'm too sensitive
That I know

Cause I can see there's...
Snow falling on a candle
Suffocating the flame
Roses placed gently down
By a family, losing hope again

Author notes

For the Rigo family (the second and third cousins I've never really met - 2002)

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  • Wow Daniela, this was deeply
    touching and beautifully scribed.
    It truly made me FEEL, as I
    myself have felt this way before.
    I can very much relate.

    Your words speak volumes.
    Loved the concept of

    "snow falling on a candle"

    --that was so clever

    Such a treasure to read

    ~Megz