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pain

Its fragile and broken
the skin in which i engraved ur name
slowly tearing apart beneath the the blade
but i feel no pain

ur memory is wilting as i am forgotten
my anger slits right through my wrists
but i feel no pain

our love is broken
giving me no time for a sense of motivation
your soul is empty and always loved me in vein
but i feel no pain

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