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Paranoia

Step into my darkness
It feels like the walls are closing in
Get me out of here
I don't want you to see me crying
Each tear falls with a resounding thud
But deafness greets the sound
And the coldness shoves me further down
Down into the ground
Weak, I stand
Falling to my knees
Nothing left
Nothing left of me
Crumbling alone in the dark
As the song of death rings in my ears
They are coming to get me
With guns and metal spears
Searing through dense forest
Falling stars meet their demise
The last words on their lips were
"The beauty's in her eyes"

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  • Damn....

    This piece is excellent. Every word is exquisite, and the structure and story fit seamlessly.

    Well done and good luck