These transparencies for eyes,
screaming at me now,
calling to me from afar,
wind blowing at her hair,
strands of chaos across her face,
she's running from the moon's sweet song,
racing the wind of the night,
we'll never know where she is going,
to us she's just a shooting star,
another face in the hall,
the girl we'll never know.
Author notes
i used three prompts in this because i thought they fit
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Comments
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I love this poem, its awesome
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whoa.
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i like this one actually
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wow
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Enthralling and enigmatic
this is poem is just great!! -
the imagery used is incredible
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i like the image this sends out... i can imagine the person
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strands of chaos across her face,
i LOVED that line
this poem was great
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This is good. Scary, but good.
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