A secret meeting,
among the woods,
a clan of sorts,
tastings the bloods,
of a new formed soul.
With fire burning out with rage,
the taste of loyalty,
Lucas takes the first sip.
And quickly, without despair,
a wild taste,
Maddii takes a gulp.
Without venom,
a weekly taste,
Vee licks the skin.
An animal being,
the strangest taste,
Molly takes the slightest sip.
With control,
the taste of leadership,
Ashlyn takes a drink.
With the scent of a newborn,
on her tongue,
Brooke takes the largest gulp of all.
With the final step,
the shyest taste,
Olivia drains the rest of the body.
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Comments
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Umm... this kinda... freaky.
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um... ur like talking about me behind my back!!! i 4give u though. its really good, but u seriously think that we'd all be that controlled over one corpse?? think real liv!!!!!!! todd would be super freaked though. gr8 job!
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i dont mean to talk to you behind ur back i just think you would be a more controled leader than maddii
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aw, thx! u know thats true though cuz we're supposed to b opposites!
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look down to lucas and vallie no it would be me beating up Olivia for fun!!! xD
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*sniffle* nobody put me in their vampire poems. not fair!
i liked this. good imagery. -
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sorry i always forget i left out mikan too
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H**Lz to the yah
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hellz to the yeah? lol XD nice lucas
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AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!111!!!!!!!
but lets get real...it would be moar than sip...
i take a sip...som1 else steps up...i grab it away and drain -
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umm lucas, i think it would be lucas cuts the poor thing open, raises it to his lips, and then has to beat down olivia to keep her away
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lol
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o.o
i must say that i don't really... who knows.
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it has to do with the hole freaking out todd thing...
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lol. i remember Lynnli talking about that.
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No, this wasn't freaky at all!
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