Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Unknown

GOODNIGHT TO DAY
GOODNIGHT I STALL
GOODNIGHT I SAY
I TAKE MY FALL

GOODNIGHT TO LOVE YET RECIEVED
GOODNIGHT TO THOSE YET TO CARE
GOODNIGHT TO THOSE YET CONCIEVED
WHOSE LIVES PROVE BY FAR MORE FAIR

GOODNIGHT TO DREAMS FALLEN SHORT
GOODNIGHT TO THE HATE ONCE MORE
GOODNIGHT PILLS USED TO RETORT
MY MIND'S UNREACHABLE SHORE

GOODNIGHT TO DAY
GOODNIGHT TO ALL
AT LAST! I SAY
I TAKE MY FALL
      X-(

Author notes

I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT TO NAME THIS... ANY IDEAS? I WANT TO HERE FROM YOU...

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Zannah
    May 25
    Edit | Reply
    Fallen seems like a good title, i like Goodnight too. Great job! i like this =]


  • Sunday Rain
    May 25
    Edit | Reply

    ...

    just an idea, but how 'bout "fallen" ya know...


  • AWistfulSoulsWings
    May 22

    Edit | Reply
    I concur with Hushed Energy, name it 'Goodnight'.
    I must say your rhyming is always so grand! : )
    and It sort of reminds me of that book "Goodnight Moon", one of my favourties.

    Jaye


  • Hushed Energy
    May 14
    Edit | Reply

    COOL!

    for a title, how about Goodnight?

    lol my titles suck
    great poem, i loved it