Perfect bliss
Our first kiss
A hug goodbye
A day gone bye
No school for you
Gone to the zoo
I sit in class
The hours pass
At two o clock
Im filled with shock
My phone shakes
For gods sake
Text from you
So I go to the loo
You say were done
My world is spun
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The room spins
I cant feel anymore
I reach into my pocket
For my pocket knife
I bring it to my wrists
I write him back;
"Goodbye"
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An ambulance screechs down the road
Kids hold each other crying over their friend
A pool of blood leads to outside the restroom
A mangeled body in the middle
Her once best friend reaches down and picks up her cellular
There on the screen it says;
"Baby I'm so sorry. One of my friends wrote that as a joke. See you soon. Love you"
The phone feel to the floor
The screen cracked off
The white cover forever stained red
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A contest entry
- A Sad Story... But a Chance at Hope by l0ve.
550 points, ended May 19, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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whoa. Thats all I have to say
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This was amazing. It really surprised me, fantastic job.
-- Tor
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Woah... i must say this caught me completely off-guard. I often write stories with unhappy endings, and to see someone else do it is... refreshing.
This is great! Good luck in the contest
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Thanks. Its not something I usually do, but it was on my mind. See concerning that phone thing it happened to me today and I was really upset when I thought he dumped me. I just thought it'd be a sad story if someone had killed themselves over love to kind it was all a joke. (:
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