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Wheels

I hear the words pour out of your mouth
Belittling me, insulting me.
Insulting the town.
My home.
Your home.

You're going to leave,
This town left with nothing but the dust
Of your car peeling out
As fast as it can.
You're such a fool.

You can't run from the past.
No one can.
What makes you seem to think
It will be any different anywhere else?
You're cursed.

Cursed with me.
Cursed with this little town
We're forced to call home.
Through the good and the bad.
Learn to deal with it.

Because honey,
You can keep spinning those tires
All you want.
Run your mouth as well.
It's getting you nowhere fast.

Author notes

You spin you wheels, but you get nowhere fast- You Talk A Good Game by Before Their Eyes.

Just kinda cranked this out. Maybe it's about nothing. Maybe it's about everything.

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  • just weak hands
    May 30
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    good write :] i like the ending the best ! a real punch in the gut. i felt, though, that the abundance in periods kind of disrupted the flow a little, but maybe that's my own perception. i honestly dont use periods a lot ! ahaha

    anyway, thanks for entering and best of luck !


  • just weak hands
    May 12

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    sorry but six is already taken !
    just tell me a different number :]

    your prompt WILL be...


    lyrics: you spin you wheels but you get nowhere fast

    You Talk A Good Game by Before Their Eyes :]

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