with all the millions of words
in the world
it will not explain what you have done
how you made me feel
how meny times my heart had been broken
how meny times you have taken
away my strength and pinned it on the floor
the tears crash around me
break every bone in my body
feel everything that i felt
cry me a river
slice up my skin
watch me bleed
watch how my world
crashes to a violent end
take me away
show me my bed
the grounds cold
lying here feels perfect
no were near alive
very near dead
the roses dye and drope with sorrow
the darkness comes over just like in my dreams
how prefect it seems
the sadness of people covers the world
now i fit in perfectly
the blood trails along my pale skin
show no signes of mercy
leaving memories of pictures in my unending life
this world will tear us apart
leaving only tears and saddness
Author notes
i have no i dear emotional time i guess
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the imagery in this poem was just amazing i could picture it in my mind. really good really really good...keep up the great work!!!!
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The imagery is beautiful in this poem and I really like the pace of the second stanza, howevre (unless intentional) you REALLY need to revise spelling (probably just typos)
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