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rose

red as blood
dangerous
like a blade
elegant
as a fair maiden
pretty like a girl
rose

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  • OurxBeginning
    May 14

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    I agree, a creative use of Similes. I liked the descriptions in this, very refreshing. I love roses, my favourite flower. Thanks for entering and good luck.

  • alphapoint05
    May 12
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    Excellent

    Excellent creative use of simile!