Excerpts from My Diary Page Seven
A whisper in pitch dark...
"You don't know me
I don't know you either
But I'm all lust, all desire....
Go for me!"
I did........
Wow...what a store of pleasure.
I still don't know who she was
black or brown?
old or young?
nothing...
but I still smell her
in, on, and around me
and want it to happen again.
What did you think
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love
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death is 4ever
love returned, pretty girl!
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Captivating!
This simply made me want MORE. This is lovely and expresses the careful art of desire beautifully. Mystery is a very sexy thing, I hope you find and capture this emotion again. take care. -
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MaidMistaken
Yes, you capurted the meaning. Thank yo, love, for the beautiful comment of yours. You're so sweet!!
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Very sensual and erotic
Great work!
x
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Oh.My.Juliet
Thank you, cute girl, for the valuable comment.
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This was so sensual. Iliked every word of your work. Reminded me of days long past Yep. been there, done that. Thanks for the memories.
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mmmm
you really got THIS THING about your writes..what's the effing word i'm looking for??? ...
oh yeah, HOTT!!!!
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Brilliant!
WOW!
very sensual!
And tonight im in one of those moods were you just wanna write sensual /erotic poems. so yeah this got to me. lol
I loved the line: I still smell her
in, on, and around me
the most!
Nice work!
-Mandi
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Jade.Butterfly
Your comment is as beautiful as you are. -
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Awe, you are to kind, thanks!
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Jade.Butterfly
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Hot, chance encounter. A nice memory. Well done.
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I'm glad you liked the experience.
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