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New Weak Life

Crusted eyes peak
Upon pilfered light
Obligation of time heaped
On shoulders
Gutteral utterances
Body winces at the thought
Clamoring for preparation
Grabbing my keys

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hope this isnt too cliche

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    May 15

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    "gutteral utterances" great way to express that deep resounding groan that many exude at the prospect of another week at the office.


  • a59teeth
    May 14
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    argh...monday morning! well said and completely understood!