your embrace feels like
warm bear protection shelter love
almost immediate car crash feels like
shrieking screeching shower curtain screaming knives
forgotten appointment feels like
over boiling eggs salty reminder thump stump stop
misspelling chartreuse feels like
hadtojustusespellcheckagain
over texting feels like
suffocation nervous other people's relationships not
i feel like
wet hair and a bottle of despair but work in an hour i think it might rain
Author notes
i just have the most awful spelling today.
hasn't started the best and i don't feel like working thru it. has it really been since april....
A contest entry
- for the lovely's [favorites only] by girl shaman.
900 points, ended May 24, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
oh, say what you mean
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hm, really really different than most writes i've read, and even the i feel like parts weren't too cliche so i liked that thanks for entering!
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well i like it.
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i demand bank look.
in other news "shower curtain screaming knives"
it's like the knife is screaming.
it's like The Knife is screaming the song "heartbeats"
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dooooooooley
MPLS
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let's quit our lives, meet up in chicago, and go on a spirit-freeing journey to remember what's good and real. i'll have family all around california and a sis in denver in a few weeks, plus a place to stay in montana. it'll be great. i'll rob a bank.
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COME TO MINNNEAPOLIS THIS SUMMER I'M NOT EVEN KIDDING
fleet foxes are coming this august. the national in the july. -
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i want in on this please please please please?
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duh!
roadtrip por favor. get our shits together. i have a place for you to staaaaay
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