Curls of brown hair
Lick at his ears
Silver frames his
stunning blue eyes.
As his tall, thin figure sits
Skillfully painting a
Beautiful inner-self portrait
Runes symbolizing
his character
Contour the border-
The canvas is filled
With Celtic beauty
And Christian influences
Ablaze with the flames
of a majestic dragon.
He paints The sky,
A remarkable sunrise fanfare
Filled with wondrous cumulus clouds
Each stroke of his brush representing
His dreams and all he aspires to be
And in the very center of the canvas
A magnificent tree is rooted
Fostering wisdom and strength.
A small heart is carved in the bark
professing his everlasting love for me.
A contest entry
- Paint Words Into My Head by Velvet Rose Petals.
1000 points, ended June 14, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Something To Comment On =) by XxNinjaNemoxX.
650 points, ended September 18, 109 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wow. I love the last stanza a whole lot. Amazing.
Thanks for entering and best of luck
xoxo. -
Ah, love.. It is beatiful. Favourite stanza was,
And in the very center of the canvas
A magnificent tree is rooted
Fostering wisdom and strength.
A small heart is carved in the bark
professing his everlasting love for me.
I really understood what his universe was, i mean he has all these beliefs and things, and then he places you in the center. Very well written.
Rose -
WOW WOW WOW thats really all I can say This is amazing nonetheless, great work on this


