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Pain of Love

My sweet dark love
How I loathe you

But yet how I yearn to hold you
The pain you've givin me

Is more than your abuse was
My soul more scared than my body

I have yet to even know if you loved me
But I figure I shall never know

Whitch adds one more scar to my spirit
One you will never know you gave.

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  • Dancing Alone
    May 17

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    I really really like this, its pretty deep, just like i asked.
    sometimes we never know how hey really feel about us.
    Sometimes we never will
    Good Job.