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Gigi

i only had you for a week
but in the end
you were nothing but weak

you ran strait toward me
the first moment i saw you
no trace of your mommy

you were cute and sweet
and occaionally used me
as your toilet seat

you were so clumsy
and when you sneezed
you fell over dizzy

you were limp in my hands
when i last came to snuggle
your heart almost stoped
and every breath you struggle

you looked strait at me
while you were dying
deeper and deeper
your life was fading

so i lay you down to sleep
and now for you
my eyes will weep

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  • TheDeadMan
    May 14

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    nice. confusing. sounds like you think little of the gy at the beggening but then youre grieving your loss of him. nice blend of emotions.