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Goddess of the Sea

Whispers of the wind
Grace my ears
and faintly,
Oh so faintly
I hear Heaven's lullaby
"  Angel, oh sweet angel
    How the earth quakes beneath thy feet
    and the sun glisten in thy hair.
    Beautiful as ever are you
    the Angel beneath the sea.
    One day, goddess of all the world's oceans you shall be,
    For water is you love
    and the sun's light more elegant by a simple touch,
    a simple touch on the surface of your sea.
    The source of all life at you command
    But we trust you well.
    A never ending adventure awaits you
    Oh Angel,
    Angel of the sea.
    Take care
    and make us proud.                "
And as they pass,
Those divine words
All I can think about is you.
My darling love,
the elegance of you voice,
the passion of you heart,
your love of water,
and my heart's desire.
They speak of you,
My Angel----
Their Angel,
Angel of the sea.
Just remember before you set sail on your journey:
You were my one and only,
Long before Goddess of the sea.

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  • Very mystical, powerful, enchanting. I felt as if I were swimming with mermaids and wishing on starfish, signing hymns to the lady of the sea. I felt the cool breeze of love 's frist tingle sweep over me, the first time I walked on the shore hand in hand with a lover. Thanks for drumming up those memories.

  • I thought your wrote this with a lovely heart and ink.
    I"m sure when more read this they too will want to
    be lovely goddesses of the sea!
    fabulous!
    ears/Seattle
    the sea beautifully reflects your ink!
    way to write!
    you could touch a little more on that
    line....your love of water...
    something...
    the glimmer, reflection, soft skin, bathing tides.

  • i like this. i wish you could have used more description and made it longer but i love it. You did nicely for your first draft of this piece