hold me
touch me
feel me
take me
kiss me
caress me
bite me
lick me
push me...
against the wall...
control me
make me
teach me...
everything
tongues
hands
lips
legs
hips
chests
backs
groins
butts
necks
feels so good...
mind dizzy
body heating
core aching
want more....
want y o u
n o w
here
i n s i d e
please...
don't r o c k my world
d
e
s
t
r
o
y it
&
m
a
k
e a new one
J u s t p l e a s e . . .
ƒu¢k me...
Author notes
I guess it's a dirty pretty... Idk. I just need to get this out of my head for awhile. yeah... hope you like it.
A contest entry
- My 50th contest!!!! by Night Terrors.
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Comments
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Don't know what dirty pretty is but yeah this is a good write. YOu did a good job on it. Thank you for sharing this write with us.
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Not quite dirty pretty but kinda close I wouldn't have entered it.
The Positives:
Um well I like the erotic part but really this isn't my style sorry
Room For Improvement:
Nothing I can see you did wonderful
Overall:
I give this a 3/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.
~*~Apathetic Poison~*~
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I love this! The way you wrote it just adds to the feel of the poem. Great job!
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Makalös
Awman!
Totaly and seriously think this one is, as we say in sweden "makalös".
Love how it reads easy. I also agree with previous comment about the lines at the end.
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oops
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"dont rock my world destroy it & make a new one"
wow love those lines.
This is great. I really like the structure of this.
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