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a beautiful mess

I intermingle with the unconcious side of my nightmares,
oddly smitten with creativity I can't form while awake.
My sanity comes into question when the twisted thoughts appear more pleasurable then reality,
but then again anything is better then reality.
Words of condemtion satuarate my ears,
but it's nothing I havent already come to terms with.
It tends to be the reason my heart is so vacant of any palpable emotion.

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short. random. but it's what i'm feeling act this exact moment.

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  • His-Dreamer
    May 15

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    Interesting. I feel like it needs something more, yet have no idea what. I love that you can put exactly what you are feeling into words & write it down. Other then that great writing!


  • Candy Morphine
    May 12

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    unconcious
    -i think that's spelt wrong.

    My sanity comes into question when the twisted thoughts appear more pleasurable then reality
    -'than' but other than that, this line is really good.

    Words of condemtion satuarate my ears,
    but it's nothing I havent already come to terms with.
    It tends to be the reason my heart is so vacant of any palpable emotion.
    -oh my gosh; that language is beautiful


    • Silent Emotions
      May 12
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      thanks for pointing out my spelling errors. spelling and grammer will certainly be the death of me =)