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Weight pain

Weight pain

The heartache, the pain I bear.
For years, this burden I hold.
Will I over come?
Eternally wrapped up, will I have control?
It beats me, sucking my strength.
A mountain, not sure to conquer.
What more to do?
My mind hopeless, if only to be set free.
To live life with out worry.
Happiness I seek.
When will I have control?
Only time itself will tell.
But soon, I need out of this hell hole.

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Prompt 2 http://ahlam-photography.deviantart.com/art/Hunger-Hurts-Series-Part-One-51603297

Hunger Hurts - Series Part One by ~ahlam-photography on deviantART



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  • dutch2lips gold member
    July 25
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    a good write, thank you for entering

  • Love the title of this poem. It says so much and delves into the psyche of so many. Beautiful piece..
    Best of luck in the contest and thank you for entering!

    becca