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Land and Fall

There is
no where,
to go.
There is
no where,
to turn.

You drop
to your
Knees,
and scream.
You close
your eyes,
and cry.

You don't
want to,
try
and stand,
Because
you'll fall.
The question is...
Will you Land?

You are to
scared
to see,
What the
answer
will be.

You ask,
Yourself,
"Will I stand,
Again.
Or fall?"
Your feelings
are a
wall.
Keeping you
from
What you
Need to do.

Break past,
The wall.
Take the chance,
and try.
Don't cry
anymore.

Fight to stand.
Within time,
You Will,
Land.

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